My First Full Length Movie. (New 3/5)

mr. macintoshmr. macintosh
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in General Discussion edited January 2014
The title of this movie is Anxious High, in reference to the type of life a High School student has to live. I play "Chris", a student that just gets fed up with his family and just everyday routine. Think of this as Ferris Bueller with a Shyamalan twist. So, here is the first 5 minutes or so of my movie, which I have written, directed, and produced. Enjoy



But first here is the script of one of my favorite scenes.



Sitting at a lunch table with friends...



Tyler: I wish they served apple sauce instead of these plain old apples everyday. I want a choice in what I eat, you know? I am really in the mood for some apple sauce.



Chris: You want some apple sauce? You want some god damned apple sauce? I will give you some apple sauce.



I then take his apple from him and smash it into my head until pulp and juices are running down my face and clothes, all while I am completely stone faced and my friends are laughing hysterically.



<a href="http://homepage.mac.com/anxious1/iMovieTheater1.html"; target="_blank">Here It Is!</a>



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  • Reply 1 of 49
    applenutapplenut Posts: 5,768member
    dear God, that was a slow moving piece of crap



    nice tunez tho
  • Reply 2 of 49
    mr. macintoshmr. macintosh Posts: 463member
    [quote]Originally posted by applenut:

    <strong>dear God, that was a slow moving piece of crap



    nice tunez tho</strong><hr></blockquote>



    What beginning to any dramatic comedy has a lighting fast start?



    Come on, it really isnt bad at all, i like the beginning.
  • Reply 3 of 49
    bioflavonoidbioflavonoid Posts: 723member
    Awesome, and I assume you used iMovie (or FCP?). I thought you did a great job portraying "getting up in the morning" - one of my most hated things. GRR



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  • Reply 4 of 49
    fellowshipfellowship Posts: 5,038member
    cool stuff Mr.M



    Gave Edge gel a plug? How much did they pay you for that?



    hehe



    Fellows
  • Reply 5 of 49
    mr. macintoshmr. macintosh Posts: 463member
    [quote]Originally posted by FellowshipChurch iBook:

    <strong>cool stuff Mr.M



    Gave Edge gel a plug? How much did they pay you for that?



    hehe



    Fellows </strong><hr></blockquote>



    Haha, you know how the big wigs handicap us with this product placement crap...And I used iMovie for this...a lot more to come, ask questions, add comments, and lend some advice or ideas to me.
  • Reply 6 of 49
    applenutapplenut Posts: 5,768member
    [quote]Originally posted by Mr. Macintosh:

    <strong>



    What beginning to any dramatic comedy has a lighting fast start?



    Come on, it really isnt bad at all, i like the beginning.</strong><hr></blockquote>



    well... the part with the 2nd song is better.... quicker pace.



    the beginning... too dragged out... not enough sound to fill it..... camera angles dont match up



    at least IMO.



    <img src="graemlins/hmmm.gif" border="0" alt="[Hmmm]" />
  • Reply 7 of 49
    drewpropsdrewprops Posts: 2,321member
    NOTE

    Product placement does not refer to music, it only refers to the use of products (like Coke, Pizza Hut, etc). Anything else (examples: photographs, original artwork and music) is a licensing issue, and studios must pay the owner of the product and obtain their written permission. In the case of photographs with other people in them the studio must also obtain the permission of the people in the photographs, and pay them a fee.



    So, music isn't product placement.
  • Reply 8 of 49
    ghost_user_nameghost_user_name Posts: 22,667member
    A shower scene?



    My retinas... burning!



    Scarred... for life!



    <img src="graemlins/surprised.gif" border="0" alt="[surprised]" />
  • Reply 9 of 49
    splinemodelsplinemodel Posts: 7,311member
    Your house is pretty posh. My parents' house is not as posh, nor have been any of my residences.
  • Reply 10 of 49
    brbr Posts: 8,395member
    Those were five minutes of my life that I regret wasting.



    You might want to try something like <a href="http://jobsearch.monster.com/getjob.asp?JobID=16651096&amp;AVSDM=2003-02-05+17% 3A22%3A00%2E000&CCD=my%2Emonster%2Ecom&JSD=jobsear ch%2Emonster%2Ecom&HD=company%2Emonster%2Ecom&AD=h ttp%3A%2F%2Fjobsearch%2Emonster%2Ecom%2Fjobsearch% 2Easp%3Fpg%3D6%26q%3Dsecretary%26sort%3Drv%26vw%3D b%26cy%3DUS%26brd%3D1%252C1862%252C1863&Logo=1&col =dltci&cy=US&brd=1%2C1862%2C1863&lid=&fn=&q=secret ary" target="_blank">this</a> instead.



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  • Reply 11 of 49
    staggerstagger Posts: 35member
    I wish I could get up as late as 7 to go to high school. 5:45 is more like it <img src="graemlins/lol.gif" border="0" alt="[Laughing]" />



    That's pretty good. A little slow moving, but I imagine it'll pick up. What can possibly not be slow moving about getting out of bed on a school day?
  • Reply 12 of 49
    emaneman Posts: 7,204member
    [quote]Originally posted by Stagger:

    <strong>I wish I could get up as late as 7 to go to high school. </strong><hr></blockquote>

    I wish I could to. I have to get up about 6:10. Horrible.
  • Reply 13 of 49
    cosmonutcosmonut Posts: 4,872member
    Not bad, Mac. As a video producer, I will say that some of it could have been paced better (action and editing), but overall it was all right for someone that's not a "professional."



    I'll give it a 8.0 on a scale of 1-10. That's a "B."
  • Reply 14 of 49
    murbotmurbot Posts: 5,262member
    When the **** did EmAn hit 8000 posts?! Holy ****ing ****.



    I can't ****ing believe it. What the ****.



    ****.
  • Reply 15 of 49
    emaneman Posts: 7,204member
    [quote]Originally posted by murbot:

    <strong>When the **** did EmAn hit 8000 posts?! Holy ****ing ****.



    I can't ****ing believe it. What the ****.



    ****.</strong><hr></blockquote>

    <img src="graemlins/lol.gif" border="0" alt="[Laughing]" /> it was sometime yesterday.
  • Reply 16 of 49
    jeffyboyjeffyboy Posts: 1,055member
    Mr. Macintosh-It beats pictures of Applenut set to Candle in the Wind!



    Jeff
  • Reply 17 of 49
    majormattmajormatt Posts: 1,077member
    You guys are harsh...



    It's not bad for an amateur, besides, the best is yet to come, right? Mr. Macintosh?
  • Reply 18 of 49
    applenutapplenut Posts: 5,768member
    [quote]Originally posted by jeffyboy:

    <strong>Mr. Macintosh-It beats pictures of Applenut set to Candle in the Wind!



    Jeff</strong><hr></blockquote>



    you aint seen any of my videos.



    im actually quite good. may major in film.



    thank you for comparing a slideshow (tiny dancer by the way) to shit.



    have a nice day jeffyboy
  • Reply 19 of 49
    mr. macintoshmr. macintosh Posts: 463member
    [quote]Originally posted by MajorMatt:

    <strong>You guys are harsh...



    It's not bad for an amateur, besides, the best is yet to come, right? Mr. Macintosh?</strong><hr></blockquote>



    Exactly man. Think along the lines of Ferris Buelers Day Off.
  • Reply 20 of 49
    defiantdefiant Posts: 4,876member
    **** EmAn ! When ? **** !! That needs to be ****ing gefeiert !!! damn !! ************ !è!





    ...





    Mr. Macintosh, I didn't like your movie. With iMovie you could do waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay better than that. You know that.
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