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in General Discussion edited January 2014
some days the subjects run both

ways out of three directions

highly improbably you say a thing

huddled into the corner and is

making loud clicking noises it

won't bother us it won't mean

a thing i'm all for that and

against you high strung superior

anarchy is fine when you're sitting

at home with a warm cup of tea



let's leave it at that shall we

i can feel your eyes on the back

of my wreck too loud too self

assured drive it home now twice

spoken accusations are as good as

true kindness warm touch reaching

in too many directions and it's not

the proper scene bathing in the

illumination when what you want to

see is behind us and overwritten



don't worry about the noises it's

all noises and three boxes in

the corner for storing all the

meanings five appointments down

one love letter to the right i've

positioned myself to never lose

there's a slight draft but a warm

heart exclamatory defense of undue

kindness just don't sit there when

i've remade myself so very ready



to listen

Comments

  • Reply 1 of 2
    curiousuburbcuriousuburb Posts: 3,325member
    nice poetry, shetline



    *buys him a coffee*



    "Ode to AO at Mars/Moon Conjunction?"
  • Reply 2 of 2
    aquafireaquafire Posts: 2,758member
    Quote:

    Originally posted by shetline

    some days the subjects run both

    ways out of three directions

    highly improbably you say a thing

    huddled into the corner and is

    making loud clicking noises it

    won't bother us it won't mean

    a thing i'm all for that and

    against you high strung superior

    anarchy is fine when you're sitting

    at home with a warm cup of tea



    let's leave it at that shall we

    i can feel your eyes on the back

    of my wreck too loud too self

    assured drive it home now twice

    spoken accusations are as good as

    true kindness warm touch reaching

    in too many directions and it's not

    the proper scene bathing in the

    illumination when what you want to

    see is behind us and overwritten



    don't worry about the noises it's

    all noises and three boxes in

    the corner for storing all the

    meanings five appointments down

    one love letter to the right i've

    positioned myself to never lose

    there's a slight draft but a warm

    heart exclamatory defense of undue

    kindness just don't sit there when

    i've remade myself so very ready



    to listen




    Post modern Parables or the makings of a writer..

    Come on Shetline..come out of the writers' Block
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