winstoner71

Establish the subject with a first and last name before just mentioning them by their last name to open the article. Just saying. It helps the readers follow the story easier. 

I usually use that emoji when referring to far right dbags so I’m glad this is false. 

Looking forward to this, as well as all of the overreaction and outrage over something as subjective as music. In the end, this is all for engagement. There is no bad engagement, there’s just engagement. Lists like these are great bc usually it introduces me to new music that for whatever reason I missed, and it’s also enjoyable to see where some of my faves land. I’ll be making a huge playlist from all the albums as well. 

Unnecessary, use of, comma. 😂.  Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you all as well. Thanks for keeping us informed about all things Apple! 

Speaking of criticism, you guys could use a proofreader. Some of that was tough to read.