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If you remove the 1st, 2nd, 5th, 6th, 7th and 8th occurrence of the word “that”, the reading  experience will be more fluid. For example, the following sentence has 3 occurrences and, as a result, is slightly awkward for the reader:

While the company claims that it would be highly unlikely that the hackers could decrypt the data, it warns users that they could be targeted by phishing or social engineering attacks.

Just remove them all. The sentence still conveys the same meaning but is less jarring:

”While the company claims it would be highly unlikely the hackers could decrypt the data, it warns users they could be targeted by phishing or social engineering attacks.”

(The 3rd and 4th occurrences are quotes so should remain.)

JanNL said:

The UK lost the protection of EU agreements when it left the Union

Or got the freedom back to make their own “rules”…

Your opinion on Brexit, William, is clear 

We already had that freedom before we left the EU.

andrewVonPelt said:

No word on the processor?

I misread that as "no word processor?" Probably not the best interface for text input! 

davgreg said:

To be truthful, the only way to be sure you have audio files you cannot have revoked is to buy physical CDs and not rely in any way on anything from an Apple server.

That’s not “the only way”.

jblongz said:

10 years ago I was hoping Apple would introduce a water cooled system, but thats a pipe dream.

I see what you did there.